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What You Don't See
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thestorysofarr
Ongoing, First published May 09, 2013
Mature
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Chase chuckled and nudged my shoulder with his fist. "Good one, Tanner."    

I could only imagine how horrified my facial expression was and even then it wasn't nearly as horrible as how I felt. Why did you just do that? Why did you tell him you like him? Obviously he doesn't like you!     

Stupid, stupid, stupid!    

He blinked as he stared at me in disbelief. "Shit" he said under his breath.  "Um... You're cool and all Brooke, but you're not really my type."    

Now this is where you say 'that's okay' and walk away before you embarrass yourself even more. But I seem to have this magical power that keeps the embarrassment flame alive against all odds.     

I turned to walk away so I could just erase everything I said like it never happened when I tripped over my soccer bag. The ground seemed so comforting as the tears streamed down my face.    

"Woah man, you alright?" Chase looked down at me sympathetically.    

"You know I'm a girl right?!" I yelled at him as I slowly got up, ignoring his hand, and sprinted to the locker room.    

Brooke Tanner, formerly known as "the girl on the guys soccer team."   

Growing up with only brothers, she's never had the chance to do girl things. She used to despise everything they were about; the nails, the makeup, the dresses, purses, and shoes. It never made sense to her. But what happens when the boy she likes can't see her as anything other than one of the guys? She decides to put away the soccer cleats and pull out the heals. It's time to become every guy's dream girl.    

 And this time, what you *don't* see... is what you get.

Warning: This story contains explicit language and adult situations.
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"Would you like to dance?" the boy asks me. I stare deep into his blue eyes, but I can't figure out who he is. He's tall with dark hair and the brightest blue eyes I've ever seen. I know everyone at this school, but with his features hidden behind his mask I can't tell who he is. "Sure, I would love to." Did I just say that? I agreed to dance with a random boy who I don't know. He takes my hand and leads me to the dance floor. We dance for a few songs and then he asks me, "Would you like to take a walk? I know the perfect place." I nod and he pulls me behind him off the dance floor. We leave the hotel and start walking down a little path. At the end of the path I notice a little fountain surrounded by candles. I wonder if he set this up. We walk over to the fountain and we sit down on the edge. "I had a wonderful time tonight," says the guy. He reaches to his face and removes his mask. I recognize him immediately. How did I not know it before? *** Carter Bennett has managed to survive her first 3 years of high school. Everything has been amazing... for the most part. She had her life completely planned out. And everything was on track. Until she met one boy. William Aston, one the school's most popular residents. Being the school's football captain, incredibly handsome and an all around nice guy. And to top it all off, every girl's dream guy. He could have anyone he wanted. But he chose the girl he could end up suffering the most in the end with. Will Carter and Will's families and friends end up driving the two apart? Will Carter's strange past drive Will away? Can Carter and Will power through their tough challenges for the one thing they have never truly experienced. Love. *COMPLETED*

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