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Immortal: Fall of Paradise (first draft)

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action adventure fiction immortal ongoing

"What is it you wish for?"
    
Haunted by the past, troubled by the present. Jack Ambrosius a seventeen-year-old with no living family has decided to exact revenge on the man who killed his family... With his sole wish before him he now has to attend, a school?! Voluntas Academy, a military school for training future soldiers with a single twist... The weapon is created by the user, using both their wish and their magic. With all the twists and turns ahead will Jack be able to graduate to achieve his goal of revenge? And what happens when he meets someone in a similar circumstance?

I do not own the image used for this cover! I do not claim the image as my own nor do I wish too and in due time it shall be replaced, the Artist and image links are below.
    
    Image: http://i.imgur.com/miJzmvd.jpg
    Artist (Bai Yemeng): pixiv.net/member.php?id=7210261All Rights Reserved

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