Till the End of Time

This is my first story that I have ever actually let a billion people read. I'm very scared and worried about how people will respond to this story. Hopefully I don't get hate 4 it because really I don't know why I would in the first place.

At the start, the characters are; Harley, a human girl about 17 yrs old, Ty, short for Tyson, and he is a young vampire about the same age as Harley, they meet each other later on. Only, towards the end, should they both find a strange loving affection for each other, or do they end up falling for others of their kind?

I hope you guys can kinda help me out a little bit with some of the parts in this story, it would help me out a lot!

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Smiley child :P