Saving Brooklynn *revising*
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*Hello! I am working on re-writing and revising this. I started it when I was a sophomore in high school and I am now 21 so I have some changes (spelling, grammar and plot line) that I would like to make. Just stick around and I promise it won't be awful! The chapters that are up, have already been updated!*
When Brooklynn Martinez, a seventeen year old New York City girl, is forced to move to Port Lavaca Texas; Her life gets turned upside down. Between her troubling past and meeting her father for the first time in her life, She finds herself opening up to someone she never thought she'd get along with.
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