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Laufend, Zuerst veröffentlicht Dez. 15, 2015
OK so this isn't a fanfic but I can change it if you want. Its a short story that I wrote for a competition a couple of months ago and I would like some feed back for it. 
I will happily edit it if you would like it!
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