Into the Darkness I wandered Further

What I have here is the beginnings of a story. My idea is to take it off into being a flashback for the most part, with all of the memories mixed together between dreams and realities. The story, from what I've planned is going to be about a gladiator. The Core is basically to be made up of the winners of the tournaments, and led be a female director who has a soft spot for Thane, the hero of the story. I'd love any suggestions on plot or what I've got to work on style wise. Telling me what I'm doing well is also helpful.