Drakentalon
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Ultima pubblicazione ven, gen 22, 2016
WARNING; The story may change frequently, for I do not have a proper planning for the story in mind thus I might decide to rework the chapters.
can't properly decide on this story
Some feedback on how I make the story would be nice.
this is my first story pls no hate.
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