'PAXTON' is a story I've been working on for quite some time. It's the story of five children from the town of Loveland, Ohio. For most of their childhood they have been friends and living happy and normal lives... till one of their fellow neighbors finally joins their school system and changes their lives. This story is not perfect, I know, and I'm sure the grammar is god awful. I'm no Stephen King. I'm mostly trying to get some pointers.
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