I've decided to try to go back and rewrite this story. I'm trying to make the chapters longer by adding more details. I'm also changing most of it. Please read it and comment what you think, and I'll take any criticism into consideration. Thank you.
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I've decided to try to go back and rewrite this story. I'm trying to make the chapters longer by adding more details. I'm also changing most of it. Please read it and comment what you think, and I'll take any criticism into consideration. Thank you.
Hello readers, this is my first time writing a story. I may have missed some details, or parts of the story might not perfectly reflect reality. I would appreciate your feedback and hope you enjoy it.