I've decided to try to go back and rewrite this story. I'm trying to make the chapters longer by adding more details. I'm also changing most of it. Please read it and comment what you think, and I'll take any criticism into consideration. Thank you.
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I've decided to try to go back and rewrite this story. I'm trying to make the chapters longer by adding more details. I'm also changing most of it. Please read it and comment what you think, and I'll take any criticism into consideration. Thank you.
This might be crap, I'm just getting back into writing after stopping for 7 years. Please bear with me for slow updates and edits. Feel free to make suggestions to changes in the story I just ask tha...