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'Did you just shoot down and possibly kill Santa?' (WIP)
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Ongoing, First published Dec 20, 2015
In this short story, we follow Agent Ben 'Blues' Adcock, after he shoots down and possibly kills Santa (hence the title)

Hey guys! So this is my first time trying some creative writing and I would love some feedback on what went well, and what could be improved

So, without further ado. I present you my book. Let's jump in, shall we?
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