The Elevator (my ending)
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I DON'T OWN THE ORIGINAL STORY BY SLEATOR!
The Elevator story by William Sleator is a suspense story, so I decided that I'll create my own ending for the story. It might be easier to understand if you read the story before reading my ending to it, but then again it might not.
Feel free to comment what you think.
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