The Most Devestating
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Ongoing<5 mins
Last published Wed, Dec 23, 2015
A little girl was walking home from a friends house when she saw her home in flames. All her family died except her aunt. When she went to a police station to find help, she was welcomed and brought home six investigators. They investigated for a long time. Two years to be exact. They started to find suspects. Will they find the real culprit? What will they do to the criminal? What will happen to this small, innocent, little girl?
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