Black Diamond

This is just a little piece of a story I'm currently working on with a friend. It will hopefully intrigue you and give you a taste of my writing style. So, if you like it.. Stay tuned for some of my other works. :3
This is actually one of the biggest plot twists in the story XD .... Well, sort of.... Anyhoo, the style of it is fantasy/ adventure. Just read it. Its very short. :D
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Critiques welcome.