Ohana is Love

Hello! This is my first English short story. I'm still a newbie in writing. I am not that really good but I hope that you'll support my short story. Well, it is not part of my plans to put this story in Wattpad because actually, this is my project in school but then I just want you to read the story and make some comments so that I will also learn from my mistakes. Thank you so much!!! Love ya!! The story is more about gods and goddesses with a bit of modern era but the setting is not modern it's just that it has scenes that uses superpowers...hahaha I know it's weird but the story is amazing and the plot has a lot of moral lessons in life... Please read the story and I hope that you will like it. There is a also a little bit of love story but not totally about love...I mean another meaning of love... much more of love towards family...okay!! this is it... thanks!!! I love you all!! Mary Clarisse by the way... :)