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Make It Shine

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Reads 515
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Parts 17
Time 2h 0m

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Make it shine centres on a boy, Dave Corbs. Dave is son of Bill Corbs former Christian and second in command at the Rockers a very notorious cult. Bill also makes Dave a bandit and Dave is involved in a rough lifestyle till one day when he gets shot by Derek a run-away orphaned from a pastor church kid.
Dave's 6 months in Comma, provide time for his dad and girlfriend Samantha to fin Christ slowly. 
Also Andrea Phillips runs from home in anger when she finds out of her mums affair. A year and a half later she's pregnant and almost died in an abortion attempt. Eventually she gets discharged and slowly seeks purpose. Then she stumbles upon Dave.
Derek is a run away kid..orphaned of a pastor. Derek carries a lot of anger and wants to be in control. In a power thrift he shoots Dave. 
Eventually, Derek meets God as does Dave and Samantha. Dave starts a group in his hospital room and there Andrea and some 24 kids find Salvation.
At the end, Dave dies. His dad Bill Corbs builds a youth centre to carry on Dave's legacyAll Rights Reserved

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Broken But Hateful by WishieAlice33

On Senior Prom Sonic was going to have a great time with his 'boyfriend' Knuckles. But turns out it was a set up that he framed Sonic for selling Cocaine and it worked. Once Sonic was thrown in jail, everyone who knew him abandoned him (even his own family). He turned to a life of crime (for a short while) after getting out of prison. He was broken as he felt nothing. But when he got to the hospital from attempted suicide and then to the asylum, a spark of light came when a kind hearted psychiatrist Offered him a job and a place to stay at his Orphanage (which is also a school for wayward youth) with his therapy. With the help of one girl and her best friend. A little bright blue hedgehog girl named Janice and a bright red echidna named Cassie. Things were plain but Sonic was still broken but he was hateful towards those who hurt him in the past. He changed his appearance and moved far away to a little bit old London (a little modern) style town selling good medicine for the people and working for the psychiatrist. When people (Knuckles, his family, and friends) from his past 'somehow found him' come to make things right, Sonic turns them away. Will Sonic give them a chance? Or will he just hate them for everything they did in the past?

Having The CEOs Baby by arabella_tomlinson

"Oh fuck me" "I think I already did that" --- "The last thing I expected to do was wake up to my brother's best friend after a breakup " If there was one thing that Katerina Montgomery was one hundred percent sure of, it was that she was treasuring her virginity for her boyfriend of 2 years, Jericho. But when Jericho dumps her on the night of their anniversary, she does the one thing that she can think of. Go to the club her billionaire father owns and get absolutely trashed before leaving with a stranger. Waking up ashamed with her virginity gone, she rolls out of bed only to see that she didn't lose it to just anyone; she lost it to one of her older brother's best friend, Alexander Storm. If there is anything that Alexander Storm was sure of, is that he didn't want to settle down at the age of 27 just so his mother would get of his back about being single. But when he wakes up next to his best friend's little sister-who then ran out of his penthouse screaming- he can't help but see Katerina as more than the teen girl he met 5 years ago and that she was unique in her own way. So when a bump-literally- brings them together, they can't help but notice that they bring the best and worst of each and Katerina sees that this whole situation started because of one thing; it all started with a one night stand with get brother's best friend and CEO and now she's having his baby. cover by @_itz_shifana

Torn into Pieces(Rewritten) by scarlett4509

Ace Bennett is a troubled kid, always has attitude with everyone and always getting into trouble constantly. A lot of people just thinks he is troubled and a spoiled brats because he has money. But in reality he is struggling with things. He doesn't feel loved by his own mom anymore, and his dad is dead. And he hates every guy his mom marries. Eventually his mom grows tired of dealing with him and sends him off to a boot camp for him to get his act straight. But there he gets to meet Alexander Morgan his Sergeant at the boot camp. And Ace loves to make people's life hard for the fun of it. Alexander Morgan is the youngest Sergeant to work at a boot camp after his 2 years in the Army. He goes into the boot camp to make the kids act better and more respectful and to leave his ugly past in his old hometown. But then he meets Ace Johnson, the most troublemaker within the entire group of kids. And Ace loves to make it harder for him. Can Alexander break through the million walls Ace has up? Can Alexander help Ace heal from his past? ------------------------------------ Trigger Warnings: -Eating Disorder -Past Self Harm -Sexual Assault -Attempted Sexual Assault -Touch Starved (Not a big warning but there if needed) -Suicidal Intentions Keep in mind. It's rewritten the original version is still up and you can read that one if you prefer it. The chapters will be changed up.

Comin in hot by CharlieGlambert

Comin' in hot, comin' in hot, no chill for me Comin' in hot, comin' in hot, red wine and weed *** Adam runs a bar together with his husband. They're both drugs dealers. They've also two kids. One day, a drug deal goes wrong and Adam is sentenced to 37 years in prison. His children are placed in foster care. Years passed and it's now 2019. Adam has escaped from prison. He wants to find his daughters, he hasn't met them in many years. He finally meets them and Robyn and Sam are so happy to see their dad again. Adam promise them that he'll never leave them again. He also meet his kid's teacher. It's love at first sight. Adam falls in love with him and they become a couple. But his ex-husband threatens to ruin his life. Their lives become a game of life and death. -Based on Comin in hot by Adam Lambert-

Envy me or hate me by VAvial

Danielle is not your average women she has everything a man can want nor the less have any man she wants. Her reputation can get the best of her by being daddies little princess. But come to realize her dad is about to lose his business so she has to choose to work her way thru with the biggest investor who is a old flame who happens to be one of the biggest way to improve the business. He has more way to keep her pampered then enough. Until she meets a man who has more priority to balance then to bow at her feet she believes she is falling head over heels for him who could also help save the business. She has to decided whether to let an old flame be an old flame or to take a chance at a new love who can love her like no man before but she'd have to be balanced in his life as well as other things. Derek is a singer whos a ex con with a talent that makes him the most popular man in Brooklyn. He isn't the shady kind but the loving kind who likes to give back and doesn't think he better than anybody else. His girlfriend of years changed up on him in the process. So the dream chasing has.come to an end because his attention is focus on what's in front of his eyes. Derek gets the chance of a lifetime to sing at the most popular club in town and he meets the daughter of the owner who wont notice him but falls in love with him. But if his past catches up to him hell lose everything so he has to decided between his past or losing something more meaningful.

Forced To Have The Bad Boys Baby (UNDER MAJOR EDITING) by ob_xxx

"Sarahi Santos, your with... Dmitry lopez." Once those words come out of her mouth, I despise them. Meet Sarahi Santos. She's one of the, "normal," people in school, not a nerd or cheerleader. Just one of those people in the middle. There's just one thing, she doesn't care about anything nor anyone. Her father left when the plague of 2042 started. She was only 10. Then there was a new law. All teenager's have to get pregnant in the matter of 2 months or it's jail time. That's something Sarahi doesn't want to do. Meet Dmitry Lopez. He's your typical bad boy and player. He's gotten into many fights and only has 3 friends Ryder, Sammy, and Cole. Dmitry was expecting a little cheerleader that will get it over with, but no. He got paired with a girl he has never met and gets curious when she blocks him out. He wants to know more. Will Sarahi finally allow someone in or block him out? Will Dmitry change or stay the same reckless boy? Can they break each other? Find out in "Forced To Have The Bad Boy's Baby." Note: this story moves fast mainly because I'm not changing the entire plot. If you want a quick read then this is the one for you :)

The Rescuer's MC - Bk 2 by Teresa35810

Prez's first wife died young from ovarian cancer and he had been devastated. He was convinced that he would never find love again, didn't really care until,, after taking down a bigamist cult called "Devlin's Disciples", Prez meets his future Queen, Amanda. Amanda has never had any luck with men. Her high school sweetheart took her V card and then dumped her. Her next boyfriend was a narcissist like her father and she she tried to break it off with him, he attacked her and carved his name into her back. She had refrained from dating for a long time but when she met Michael in the grocery store, he had seemed so nice, was fairly handsome in the face and such a gentleman. Well, it didn't take her long to figure out he was not the one for her and she had agreed to one final date where she planned to tell him but he spiked her drink and while she was unconscious, he claimed he had the head of his church, which turned out to the cult, marry them. He held her prisoner for almost a year before the Rescuer's saved not only her but all the women and children of the cult. And they are not the only ones to find love during this encounter!

Welcome to the the Low Life : Playing Dirty by BriTheWriterr

Growing up in the hood isn't easy . Murders , shootouts , drugs , prostitutes and dope boys are normal . Imagine being sucked in the gritty at just sixteen years old . Cashmere always had it rough with an absent father and drug addict for a mother . Cashmere's older brother Dhaz introduces her to a world of violence by being a stick up kid . Her job is to use her good lucks to finesse the local drug dealers to rob them of their money and drugs but what happens when Dhaz gets locked up leaving Cashmere to take care of herself . Stuck with an mother who could care less about her she takes on the role of an adult . From robbing dopeboys , to popping her pussy for a few dollars Cashmere is trying her best to keep her head up and not let certain choices define her . At twenty years old Riquardo is ready to take over the drug world by storm and sit at his rightful place as head of the Throne . With the rise of his gang GMBAM he manages to take over the hood by knocking off his competition but he gains a weakness when he falls for Cashmere . But Cashmere isn't trying to fall in love , she's just playing the game like she does all the other dope boys preying on him to get what she wants . Will the two become lovers or enemies ? Two can play the game but someone has to lose . Will the greed for money overshadow love ? This a the tale of two young adults who are trying to survive in the low life of New York.

Hey Brother by CharlieGlambert

"Mom and dad has always like you better." I yelled. "Please calm down Adam." said Matt. "Now you'll take my children away from me." I replied coldly. *** Adam lives in a run down house with his teenage kids. They barely have anything to eat for the day. He's dating guys who just use him. He's drinking and doing drugs. He can barley take care of his children. He breaks down when they're taken away from him to live with his rich brother. Adam promise to be a better father to them. But nothing helps. Adam has always been jealous of his older brother. Matt always got all the attention while Adam stood the shadow. He starts working as a stripper to afford food and clothes, but he hates what he does. All he wants is to get his children back. But he knows they're better off with their uncle. Food on the table, real beds to sleep in. But everything is not what it seems. Adam must also confront his dark past.

Hell. Inside. Heaven by SupIAmMark

Cara Santos and her family were once living in the Hacienda of the Marquez and they work their as farmers and maids for the the rich family who also rules the whole city. As they work their, she suddenly meets and falls for one of the sons of the family, they kept their relationship secret because their love was forbidden for the family. They got to have 4 children in their secret 5 year relationship but the secret never lasted. Their secret slowly spread all over the hacienda. As it reaches the head of the family, the Santos family were ordered to be hunt down that killed Cara's parents. As soon as Cara's lover finds out about what happened, he begged his parents to not kill Cara; instead, Cara must leave the whole city and never return again. For Cara, his lover's decision was not enough because she thought that she will be protected and his lover will take responsibility of her but as soon as the Cara and her children were forced to be banned from the city, she never seen him again. Cara worked hard years after the tragedy and struggled giving her children the best life; fortunately, the small restaurant business she made boomed and got attention from the city she was living in and she immediately rose to success and reached a high peak of her life. More years after her success started, she decides to take revenge and take down the people who once treated her like a dirt and her 4 children and 1 adopted son agreed on her plan. They are about to return to Hudson City and from now on, Cara will make sure that the Marquez will get what they deserve after years of suffering from them. She will make sure that the Hacienda will never stay heaven cause as soon as she steps inside the whole city, the real image of the family will be revealed and you will figure out it was never heaven but hell.

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Broken But Hateful cover

Having The CEOs Baby cover

Torn into Pieces(Rewritten) cover

Comin in hot cover

Envy me or hate me cover

Forced To Have The Bad Boys Baby (UNDER MAJOR EDITING) cover

The Rescuer's MC - Bk 2 cover

Welcome to the the Low Life : Playing Dirty cover

Hey Brother cover

Hell. Inside. Heaven cover

Broken But Hateful

On Senior Prom Sonic was going to have a great time with his 'boyfriend' Knuckles. But turns out it was a set up that he framed Sonic for selling Cocaine and it worked. Once Sonic was thrown in jail, everyone who knew him abandoned him (even his own family). He turned to a life of crime (for a short while) after getting out of prison. He was broken as he felt nothing. But when he got to the hospital from attempted suicide and then to the asylum, a spark of light came when a kind hearted psychiatrist Offered him a job and a place to stay at his Orphanage (which is also a school for wayward youth) with his therapy. With the help of one girl and her best friend. A little bright blue hedgehog girl named Janice and a bright red echidna named Cassie. Things were plain but Sonic was still broken but he was hateful towards those who hurt him in the past. He changed his appearance and moved far away to a little bit old London (a little modern) style town selling good medicine for the people and working for the psychiatrist. When people (Knuckles, his family, and friends) from his past 'somehow found him' come to make things right, Sonic turns them away. Will Sonic give them a chance? Or will he just hate them for everything they did in the past?