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Promise Me
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Complete, First published Dec 24, 2015
Mature
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CHAPTERS COMPLETE: 3

"You promised!" I screamed as they dragged me away, hot tears rushed from my eyes and down my cheeks, I was so hurt. I didn't break what little sight of him I could manage holding onto, savoring each and every second of his beautiful features, staring deep into those yellow eyes of his. "You said you'd always be there! " I shouted, kicking and punching the backs of the storm troopers, desperate to escape their strong and uncomfortable hold on me as they carried me away from my disgraceful husband.

 "You lied! just like you always have!" I dramatically added, dropping my legs and arms, allowing them to hang carelessly, seeing that there was no use, I wasn't getting out of this."I gave up everything, for you!" I tell him, as one last tear falls down my red hot cheek before finally losing sight of his broken self.

~~~~~~

Nicolette Skywalker, wife of Anakin Skywalker. She was a Jedi knight who fought alongside him and Obi Wan Kenobi. They were married in secret for it was forbidden that a Jedi fall in love. 

But you already know that.
Some would deem this an untold tale, one forced into the shadows and replaced with a much more, devastating love story. Something that never existed, a fake, a fraud and perhaps a lone girls imagination miraculously put together in a time span of a few months.

That's not what this is.

This isn't Anakin's, or Luke's prophecy being told. No this is another, more unknown Skywalker, once buried in the depths of the darkest place in the galaxy. This is her story. This is Nicolette Tate's untold tale.

 "After the empire uprising Anakin is turned against the Jedi order and disappears without a trace. Nico follows him like a good wife would do, but will she be able to fall back in love with the one who fell?"
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