can i ever do it right
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Last published Wed, Jun 29, 2016
a divergent fanfic , starts off with an achieving girl from candor trying to get away from her abusive father and non caring mother. she transfers to dauntless looking for a better life, but has a rough start with her conflicting personalities with dauntless' youngest leader Eric.
will she make it at dauntless? if so will she be officially happy with her life choosing? will she actually fall in love with the guy she claims she hates with all her guts?
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