The Next Victim (Rewritten)
- Reads 41
- Votes 1
- Parts 2
Ongoing10m
Last published Tue, Jan 12, 2016
This is a rewrite of my story The Next Victim. Just the one I published a year ago is really cringe worthy to me so I feel like writing it again. I can guarantee this will be 100% better than the last one so be excited about that.
All Rights Reserved
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
"You brought me back to life"-Rewritten(GREENWIND)
This is a rewritten story that I originally wrote year(s) ago. If you want more details- the original book is still available on my page.Complete
Deep Desires : Miss Mafia
**** Mature content**** "You wanna know why I'm angry?" He said in between the kisses. "Because of you" He said as he continued and my body tensed and shivered. "Every time I think I have control over myself and decide to leave this place... to leave ... you. I stop and walk back like a puppy" He said turning me around now. "Every time I meet someone, I compare them to you. Every fucking time I remind myself that you're an enemy, I want you even more" he said and I knew that this was one of the hardest thing for him to do. He and neither I like to talk about how we are feeling or face reality. Yet he still did it. "What the fuck are you doing to me Mia Bella?" He whispered with his forehead on mine and our lips inches apart. "Kiss me" I replied • • • Mafia, drugs, weapons, and all the dangerous and abnormal you can think of is what Alexandra Salvatore has to deal with on daily basis. But will that stop her from having the most rare yet desired & powerful thing in this world? Will it stop her from finding love? An action/romance story based on imaginations and imaginations only, don't try any of this shit cause you'll die. No but seriously don't go around throwing knifes, shooting people and drinking JackDaniels every day. ------------------ Please note that this story has: • Strong language • Violence • Mature themes If for some reason it bothers you, just click away. It's simple, I promise. For the rest of you lovely people HELLO AND WELCOME FEEL FREE TO BRING PIZZA. Oh yeah for you grammar freaks I'm from Sweden so there might probably will be some grammar/spelling mistakes. Just feel free to correct me if you're that kind or JUST IGNORE IT. Nothing will happen to you if you do.. I promise. The story is complete! RANKINGS #1 in love (2018-07-02) #1 in crimefiction (2018-07-02) #1 in romance (2018-07-02) #1 in guns (2019-06-23) #1 in weapons (2019-06-16)Complete
-Crinx-a love story
Hello! This is a Crinx(Minx x Cry) story I am currently re-writing the story to make it a little better but I hope you still enjoy! RE-WRITING I REPEAT RE-WRITING!Complete
𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐋𝐀𝐕𝐎𝐑 𝐌.𝐏 (edited)
this book is toxic ( teenage love ) made on 2/16/20 its kinda bad in the beginning but I promise it gets better. im also dyslexic so im sorry about the mistakesComplete
Mystic
Just something I wrote a couple years back that is unedited. Thank goodness I've improved. Criticism is loved since I'm new!Complete
Kourriel's Lodge of Sins
Happy Halloween! This is a sequel to a horror story I wrote years ago, I wanted to write a horror story in October for a while and finally accomplished that goal.Complete
Pregnant with the italian's baby ✔
DISCLAIMER!!!!!! This book is probably very bad! Who am I kidding? there's no probably, it's very bad. There are probably some things that don't make sense or don't add up, and the writing in the first chapters (or all) is bad. I know I have improved but this was just a warning, so I don't get cussed out in the comments. Lol, jk. I wrote this when I was younger (I hated editing) so there are a lot of mistakes with capitalizing, punctuation, sentence structure etc. Read at your own risk. You were warned. ************ Excerpt. The pounding of my head could be heard from a mile away. I closed my eyes tightly and tried not to focus on the pain. I was becoming irritated by both the headache and the stupid chains. I opened my eyes and looked over at my sister, she was sleeping with her head hanging low. I looked away from her and pulled on the chains, ignoring the migraine I'm pretty sure I have. This is just pure cruelty, I really prefered staying in the room. I looked around the room, for what felt like the millionth time within this hour. I took a deep and long breath before I just let my hands hang to the sides of my head in the chains. My breathing slowed and I closed my eyes. When I opened my eyes a while after I noticed that someone was in the room. "What are you doing in here?" I asked. ~~~~~~~~ Highest Rank #1 in General Fiction. New cover made by @lexusloveangels. Thanks again, I love it.Complete
ʷⁱᵗʰⁱⁿ ᵘˢ
"𝘪 𝘭𝘰𝘷𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘣𝘦𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘴𝘮𝘢 𝘭𝘦𝘵 𝘮𝘦 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘺𝘰𝘶" (𝘓𝘶𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘦𝘴 𝘴𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘴) mᥲ𝗍ᥙrᥱ/grᥲ⍴һіᥴ ᥣᥲᥒgᥙᥲgᥱ ᥲᥒძ smᥙ𝗍..(vote for me to keep going ) BEING RE-WRITTEN AND FIXED UP HEAVILY. wrote this in 2020..Complete
This is a rewritten story that I originally wrote year(s) ago. If you want more details- the original book is still available on my page.
More detailsContent Guidelines