I need help
jaime2810
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jaime2810
Ongoing, First published Dec 27, 2015
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It's a very early draft of something that I am working on. I need advice, what can I do to make this part better, I have an idea of where I am taking this story but I need your opinion of this first part. It's a very early draft I repeat.
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