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"I Saw Her First"
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Ongoing, First published Dec 28, 2015
"I saw her first," Ashton said

"Well, I called her first," Luke said

"She's not an inanimate object, Luke, you can't just 'call her'," Ashton explained

"Well, how come I already did?" Luke smirked

"Goodbye, Luke." Ashton said, and he left Luke's bedroom.

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Well this story is gonna be about Luke and Ashton Hemmings, they're brothers and are fighting over the same girl. That is....until someone else comes into the picture, could say it's a love square?

Anna-Lee Styles; an oblivious girl who has no idea that Ashton and Luke are fighting over her, she just thinks that they are wanting to be her friend. Who does she choose, when she finds out that they both like her? What about the third person? 

I have to give credit to my best friend, Kelsey or 37_zombie_killers for the story title. Read more to find out!
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"Have you heard from Luke ?" Calum asked me over the phone. "We have no idea where he would be. Bella you know him better than any of us, if anything you can find out where he is..... better than us, trust me we've tried. " Michael said. Why would they think that ? Yes Luke and I have grown closer, but what he did was unforgettable. I'm not gonna say that I don't miss him though or that would be a utter lie. He's changes me as I have done so to him. "B he doesn't let people get to know him. He's let you in, Bella he really needs you , and quit frankly you need him too." "Okay, maybe I do but why does that matter ?" I said shyly I go the phone. "Bella I know what Luke did was stupid, but I promise you Luke would never do anything intentionally to hurt you or your feelings. I think he loves you Bella, like really loves you." Micheal said. Luke couldn't love me. Could he ? He doesn't have the same feeling I do for him as he does for me. "Okay....I'm going to find him...." I said before hanging up. ----------------------------------------------------------------- When Bella and her twin brother Ashton and younger brother Colton have to move from American back to their home town of Sydney in Australia. They move back because of there drug addict mother, but now have to live with their alcoholic father. Bella thought her life was coming to the end , having the responsibility to protect her family at the age of 17. This is the only thing she has left in her life. The worst thing to her would be moving back and remembering her horrible past and now having to start over again. That is until she met Luke Hemmings. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Fully completed. There might be misspelt words or grammar please comment if you see a mistake I would be happy to fix it ! Throughout the book make sure you leave likes and comment/ reactions to the book while reading I would love to know what you think ! Have fun reading - Emmie