On the road to perfection

On the road to perfection

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Pound by Pound Look at yourself fat ass You need to lose some weight A thin, beautiful, perfect child I will help you create First we'll start with one pound And by the time that's through It can't possibly be enough So now we'll push for two The two pounds come and go But you're still not pleased with what you see So then I'll whisper in your ear "Hey let's shoot for three" Pound after pound you will shed But yet you yearn for more So what's the harm I say Our next goal will be four Over the time you'll get addicted Four will turn to eight And so you'll keep on losing As you fuss about your weight You look in the mirror and your unpleased With the fat protruding from your skin Eight turns into sixteen You just want to be thin Oh hold on now you're getting sick But you don't give a damn Because now you're truly obsessed You're scared of gaining just one gram And by now you've lost fifty pounds And you want to double that But don't you see you're getting deathly thin You're the opposite of fat But you don't see it So you say "A couple more pounds, just a few" And not that much further on This disease has killed you So people go to your funeral And they cry as they play that last song And I'm just standing there smirking Don't you see this was my plan all along -Unknown *Trigger warning, if you are sensitive to Eating Disorders and Strong language don't read*
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"I felt as if I didn't belong, And I felt as if i'm not sick enough" Alfie struggles with the concept of food. He loves it, he hates it and just wants to find peace with it and within himself. He wants to make up with his body, his mind but he's lost all control so he's finding it hard to live. Alfie Hailo, a 16 year old swimmer, has been struggling with food since the age of 13. His parents put him in dance class when he was 6 but he was getting bullied as he got older, so decided to quit and choose a more 'masculine' sport.His father also left the family home 2 years prior and has been struggling to understand why. He has amazing friends, and an amazing family who love and care for him dearly but, he doesn't feel this. He feels like he has to be perfect. With the pressure of school, and having to keep up to the social norms of a professional swimmer, it's hard for Alfie to concentrate. He needs the help. And to do this, Alvin helps. Alvin helps him find his worth, take control, and makes his life easier, or so he seems. His best friends, Killian and Ruby, know Alfie inside and out. They know his family life, school life. And this is because Alfie is a simple person. He has never had a detention, nor has he been expelled. He's a straight A student with no history of alcohol or drug abuse. Will they suspect anything? How will Alfie proceed with his excruciating pain. Will he cover it up or will he find the courage to speak up and seek help?

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