Story cover for Commitment of the Mind by daphneeieroway
Commitment of the Mind
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Ongoing, First published Dec 30, 2015
Mature
Kellin Quinn- a 20 year old boy who moved to America from France is sick of living. He decides one night he wants to take a trip down to the ole' bridge. What he's going to do there, he doesn't know; until the answer is clear. 

Vic Fuentes- a 30 year old short Mexican who majors in psychology and happens to have a daughter. He is coming back from dropping his brother off at his house when he catches a boy about to jump off of the bridge out of the corner of his eye. And he decides-he can't let this boy die.

These two are polar opposites, who will soon take a liking to each other. But will Vic's past or Kellin's problems get in the way? Will they be able to work past them or do they just give up?

But one thing is certain, and it's that none of it will be easy.
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Vic (20) is being sent to a mental institution and is not happy about it. Its for his own good, so his family says. There's so many things that's wrong with him, but doesn't want to believe it. When he's roommates with Kellin (18), a boy who doesn't like to talk to anyone, and is isolated and closed off, spends most of his time drawing; Vic doesn't know what's wrong with his roommate, he simply thinks that Kellin's insane, and that he doesn't belong with someone like Kellin. Vic doesn't think he needs to be in that place at all. But they are forced to spend time with each other. Until the two boys make an unlikely connection they never saw coming. Warnings: I'm saying this now, and it goes toward the entire story; there are going to be a lot of references to suicide and self harm and other mental illnesses and things associated with them so if that makes you uncomfortable then don't read. Otherwise enjoy. Title credits: A Loaded Smile by Adam Lambert