Aca-Awkward Love Triangle (A Kommissaar, Pieter & Beca Fanfic)
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Last published Sat, Apr 16, 2016
After losing The Worlds to Beca and the Barden Bellas, Kommissar goes to apologise and congratulate the Bellas along with the rest of DSM. Surprisingly though a friendship sparks between both A Capella groups, especially between Beca and Kommissar.
When Beca and Jesse go through a rough patch in their relationship they end up breaking up, leaving Beca completely distraught and heartbroken. Knowing the rest of the Bellas will end up finding out anyway, Beca turns to Kommissar for advice.
Both girls end up very close in the process. Kommissar and Beca end up with feelings for one another but when a fight sparks up between the two Kommissar turns to the one person who has always been there for her - Pieter.
However Pieter, having always had feelings for Kommissar, sees this as an opportunity to win over her somewhat stone cold heart - in which, he succeeds.
After making up with Beca however who does Kommissar choose as her lover - Beca or Pieter.
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Just the usual, I do not own the characters from Pitch Perfect & Pitch Perfect 2. Blah blah, it's pretty obvious. However storyline and Kommissar and Pieter's back stories are entirely from my imagination
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