One Shot

This is a very short one shot I wrote for a school project. It is supposed to be from the perspective the main character of a book and from before the book. I chose Nora Grey from the book Crescendo by Becca Fitzpatrick. I would just like to know how it is and I ask that if you see any Grammatical/ punctuation mistake that you tell me. Hope you like it and please don't judge too much

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