The Unknown Origins: Introduction.

Another novel I have finally began writing, this is the introduction; please, read it and give me some feedback via comments. I am 15 years of age, and I am a beginning author of both novels and screenplays, as well as an actor, Thank you!
Ps. Cara Delevingne (cover) does not appear in this story, I just liked the photo, and am also a huge fan of hers!