Excerpt #1

This is my first excerpt I am uploading to Wattpad, I wrote it in english class a few years ago while my teacher was talking about grammar rules, I never did learn these grammar rules and I probably will regret it one day. My teacher had asked my class to write down in our note books "The boy stood..." and it sparked my brain so I wrote down this little story. After spending some weeks fixing it up I thought it was pretty good. The story is written in third person and is a sad story. Please enjoy and criticize it as much as you would like to. Thank you!!