The Initiation
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When Mae wakes up in a strange building with no memory of her past she is far from scared. She is extremely curious.
With doctors watching her every move and dozens of other brainwashed teenagers surrounding her she can't help but wonder about the life she had before this.
But soon enough she is put to the test. The doctors tell her not to worry as they rush her and her new acquired teammates through what they call "The Initiation."
Will she meet everyone's expectations or fail and have to face the extreme consequences?
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