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Ongoing, First published Jan 04, 2016
Mature
If you asked Jonah Kershaw if he was happy, then he would tell you "yes". Well he would be lying. The truth is Jonah is not happy. Jonah wishes he was back at hi old school, with his old friends. Sure he has his family and some new friends, but he still misses his old life. Not to mention he is having problems with his girlfriend. Then he meets Mary, an interesting yet mysterious new girl.

Mary-Laine Beckerman has been alone for years. Sure there are always people around her, but none of them ever realizes she is there. When Mary returns to her old high school, she senses something different about Jonah, and when she discovered he can tell she is there, she isn't completely  alone anymore. One problem is, how long can she hide her secret from him?

Jonah knows there is something off about Mary, and Mary hopes Jonah is her way out of an eternity alone.


"Who are you?" I asked, tired of waiting for her to answer on her own. All she told me about who she was, I was starting to believe was a lie. I desperately wanted to believe the girl in front of me was the girl I thought I knew, but I really wasn't sure anymore.
"It's me." she said. She was begging me with her eyes to believe her, to believe what she was about to say. "I'm still Mary."
"Okay, then what are you?" I asked.
She sighed and looked away. "That's going to be harder to answer."

ON HOLD - I won't be updating this book any time soon. Eventually I hope to get back to it, but I have other stuff to focus on. Sorry to the few people who have read this.
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