Clumsy // Eric Divergent //
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Sarah is set on choosing Erudite at the choosing ceremony, she breathes it, but her clumsiness gets her into a polar opposite faction. She finds out that maybe erudite wasn't her faction after all, that maybe Dauntless might lead her to excitement and to meeting another erudite transfer.
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Why I decided to write this:
I was up all night one night looking up specifically for Eric fanfiction (I was just really obsessed with him one night) and realised (that not just in Eric stories it's also other Divergent stuff) is that the girl wants to purposefully get away from her faction, because it's not them. I know that's why people leave their factions but, I thought maybe starting it off a little different might be good. Plus she might be an initiate with a fellow two hotties but I won't say too much...
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