Please Give Me Your Feedback
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angelscanflyicant
Ongoing, First published Jan 08, 2016
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Hi guys! Not sure if I want to continue with this story or not so I would appreciate your feedback! Thanks
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Play The Part (Player Next Door Book 3)

51 parts Ongoing

Millie Ripley has only ever known one player next door. Luke Dawson. But with only a couple months left before he graduates and a blackmailer on the loose, will their love story stand the test of time? And will they both need to grow up to face the truth?

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