Lose Control
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  • Reads 1,484
  • Votes 75
  • Parts 23
  • Time 2h 21m
Complete, First published Jan 11, 2016
(The Force Awakens Fanfic) The day she lost her parents was one of grief and joy for Zeh Skurn. From then on she was both free from her Mother's horror of her power... but she also lost her father's love and protection. Of course she can't remember much of them now, not that she has time or the desire to with the field she works in. In fact, it was due to being a bounty hunter that got her tangled in the mess between the First Order and the Resistance. Now, captured by the Sith, Kylo Ren, she will have to choose which side she will finally join... and Skurn better pick right or her life will be over. 
  Alder Solo, brother to Ben Solo, son of Leia and Han. He witnessed the massacre of the new order of Jedi, barely escaping with his own life as he fled. A coward, always the coward in the family, not like Ben had been. Alder couldn't even use the force, though his skill with a lightsaber was admirable. Now he has an opportunity to redeem himself and bring his brother back to the light, will he be able to accomplish his task and learn to accept his lack of the Force or will Kylo Ren destroy him completely? 
  One thing is certain: The First Order has strength beyond that of the Resistance and with Zeh Skurn under their influence the Resistance needs Luke Skywalker found and Finn, Poe, and Rey must help Alder find his true path if they are to ever defeat Kylo Ren.
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