He's a Detective

He's a Detective

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Did you ever fall in love with a detective? A man who is full of reasoning and deduction of all the things that is strange and odd to him. Unluckily, I fall in love with my detective best friend. He is a jerk. I don't like him but how did he get my heart even doing nothing? Hi! I am Nivenly Mae Henson (17 years old). You can call me Mae or Niv but I prefer Niv. You know it's unique. I am the childhood friend of that so called detective. He is handsome and many girls love him. He is my best friend but suddenly I fall in love with him. I am Nathaniel Jimenez (18 years old) and I am a detective. I am the famous detective in the country. I love being a detective but I don't want to be famous but it is too late now, with this brilliant mind and solved cases immediately, I became popular. They call me NJ or Nathaniel but I like Nate because my best friend gave that nickname to me. She is the only one who is calling that name to me. . . Let the story begin...............
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She love me but I took her for granted. She devoted her whole life to me and to our son, but what did I do? I pushed her away, I pushed them away and worst is I denied my son. She treated me as his king but I treated her the other way around. I treated her miserably --like a shit. Now I'm suffering the consequences of my actions. I regret the times I choose to hurt her and my son. So now, I will correct everything. I am determined to build the family I once broke. I will do everything just to get my family back. I am willing to sacrifice just to get my son back, to get my wife back. I will do everything just to find my lost queen. *********************** WARNING: This part of the story contains bad and offensive words. Please don't use this words on your everyday conversation. It's not good to hear. Please beware of the words. ****I USED THE WORDS FOR THE SAKE OF THE STORY NOT FOR YOU TO IMITATE. Special Thanks to Psychocolates for my fabulous cover.

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