Alone, Broken, and Hated.

This is my first story, it probably sucks. I'm not going to ask you to not judge/critisize, in fact, I would very much enjoy helpful critisism. Tell me how I can do better! Just, no straight up flames, 'kay? If you don't like it, either don't read, or tell me how I can do better. I know it is a bit inaccurate, but it fits the story better.
Also, trigger warning. It involves suicide. If you are sensitive, please don't read. I don't want to hurt anyone.
P.S. I know the title sucks. If you can think of a better one, please let me know, and I'll change it.