The River's Mask (flash fiction challenge)

The River's Mask (flash fiction challenge)

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This is a little story I came up with after reading a post on Chuck Wendig's blog. http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2016/01/15/flash-fiction-challenge-choose-your-title-and-write/ This post presented a fun little challenge that I was given to finish in one week. So bear with me as I will attempt to pour out two thousand+ words about my chosen title, all the while juggling two school assignments, studying, my perfectionism and the constant feeling of having to pull my crap together and start doing things I want/need to do. Procrastination-fueled self-loathing aside: The River's Mask - by Rick Driesen Mira Essens is quite unfortunate. sure, she's given a small myriad of possibilities. But her habit of not paying attention to the mud she steps in can get quite... hazardous. Unseen mud is extra slippery. After a long journey, she's almost at her final destination. Just one obstacle remains. It's not like she expected much. But this still felt like a great oppertunity to take a big leap. after all, she can't always land feet-first into life's filthy puddles, can she? warning: this following text will contain fowl language.
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