Spoiled
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  • Time 1h 1m
Complete, First published Jan 17, 2016
[Being Edited Along The Way]

Based/Built Around MikaelaBender's series: Expiration Date, which is amazing and you should totally go read it for some extra information. 

Welcome to the world of destiny and fate, the world where your death date is known from birth; and there's no escaping it. Or is there? 

Simon Wright and Deidre Doniver are destined to die within a week of each other so naturally they're best of friends. In fact they even kissed once in third grade, but that was weird and its not the point. 

The point is Deidre doesn't trust the Society, and when Simon comes home from work one day and tells the story of being kidnapped by rebels Deidre's suspicions are confirmed.

Fate can be changed. 

Or can it? Is there an actual possibility of becoming Expired or becoming Spoiled, dying before your Mark says so? Read to find out!
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