How Jack Wrote The Universe (Revised)
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[Revised]
Jack Halley is best known in Hayden for his writing, deemed as the boy who writes with stars, his title soon gets challenged when Hayden's Miss Sunshine commits suicide one day leaving no suicide letter, only her lacerated wrist connected to her dead body.
With his title in danger, Jack must find out who this girl was and write the best eulogy he can come up with before the girl's burial ceremony.
Set in a two-week course, Jack soon unravels who Hayden's Miss Sunshine really was. But Jack tends to glorify and puts people on high pedastal easily. Can he cope after all the lies been said? Especially when he finds out that Ladi isn't really the girl he and everyone, thinks?
This is Jack and Ladi's story; this is how he wrote the universe and put it into one paragraph.
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