Broken
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Last published Wed, Jan 27, 2016
\\Kavi//
Kirstin didn't belong in the city walls. Didn't believe in the test, the limited choice, the planned life. Heck, she didn't believe in the strict appearance codes either. But she had to be here.
For him.
Avriel loved the order his society brought. He knew his place, he never worried if there would be food on the table, and never worried about the dangers outside their walled city. He knew he was to marry a girl he felt perfect for. He got to choose her. Until the tests were proven "faulty" and his job, appearance, and life changed.
He was stuck with her.
Kirstin was an important part of the resistance that was to destroy the strict ruling. If only she wasn't held back by him.
If only she wasn't broken.
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