In a comatose state(on hold)
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Last published Thu, Jan 21, 2016
Seventeen year old Olivia May has been in a coma ever since the age of twelve due to a tragic accident caused by her abusive father. Since the accident she has been able to understand and hear people talk but, she does have memory loss and gaps in all memories she'd lived through, forgetting good memories and only remembering bad.
And the there was eighteen year old Elliot Bentley, who was an obnoxious, annoying teenage boy who had any thing he could dream of.
On a visit to his mom's hospital, he meet Olivia.
What are the sparks he felt every time he was around her? or the amazing scent Olivia seems to have around her? even the sudden pull...?
Please read I can't guarantee its amazing but just give it a try
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