The Devil within

The Devil within

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This story is about a 17 year old girl named Valerie, she is an ordinary, classic teenager who has a phobia of being home alone, however she has told NOONE not even her parents. The one night, her parents went out to dinner leaving Valerie at home alone. 10:00pm at night Valerie starts to feel cold, which was very confusing as all the windows were closed. That's when she see's it. She sees the Devil and that is where it all started.
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I'll tell you when the first tear falls

Valerie thinks that she's just an ordinary girl from chicago until she starts to hear a voice in her head she's had since birth more clearly. Is she just a normal girl? Or something more than ordinary...

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