Hetalia- Germany Love Story (On-Hold)(Fixing mistakes)

This is story about Roma a girl who's a tomboy who is the capered of Italy. Don't say someone in Hetalia has this name if so she is name after someone, like Roman Empire but still just in case you people wont say I seal the name from someone. Anyway lets counted the inform thing and I well tell you more about Roma.

Another: So I been thinking fixing this up and such because when I read it I could do better now since I'm older and more mature, knowing how to fix my story line of course I won't really change the story line just fix parts and improve my writing style. :D
pls comment what you think I should do improving my writing skills or help you read the story more easier.

if you like the story so far plz comment it you want to read more it really helps! :3