Comatose
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A story about a young girl who goes into a coma due to a bad accident. She then dreams as if her life continued, as if nothing happened. Then she wakes up, and gets another chance to change her life.
Written by: AmelyaPond
Name and some ideas credit: My friend Brandon
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