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𝗗𝗲𝘀𝗶𝗿𝗲 𝗔𝗻𝗱 𝗗𝗲𝗹𝗶𝗰𝗮𝗰𝘆 by authorosee

𝗦𝗵𝗲 𝗜𝘀 𝗧𝗼𝗼 𝗗𝗲𝗹𝗶𝗰𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝗙𝗼𝗿 His 𝗗𝗲𝘀𝗶𝗿𝗲 "Damm, whenever you're in my arms, I feel like I might crush you. You're so delicate," he said, kissing her cheek. "Huh?" "It took me three years to hug you, and today you let him hug you, huh?" he asked, trying to control his anger. "He is your brother," she said, trying to move from his grip. "So what? It doesn't matter. We'v been married for a month, and you didn't allow me to kiss you. But today, you hug him? I'm very upset," he said, looking straight into her eyes. "I'm sorry," she said. "I'm a very loyal and possessive man. Just because I haven't kissed or touched you doesn't mean I can't. Now, what will you do to make it up to me?" "I... I will..." "You will what?" "I will sit on your lap and feed you," she said. "From now on, you'll do this every morning and night."

𝐅𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐬 𝐎𝐮𝐫𝐬 ♡⸝⸝ by Enchanted-Willow

"Forever is Ours" is a tender collection of poetic work binding the complex sensation of love's uncountable emotions. Each verse is a delicate brushstroke upon the canvas of a lover's heartbeat, exploring the depths of passion, longing, and connection towards their partner. With every poem, readers board on an enchanting journey through the forest of love.

𝐁𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐝𝐢𝐞 {𝐅𝐮𝐥𝐥 𝐇𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐞} [𝐎𝐂 𝐗 𝐎𝐂] by RachelGreensWife

"𝑻𝒉𝒆𝒓𝒆'𝒔 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒍𝒍𝒚 𝒏𝒐 𝒘𝒂𝒚 𝒐𝒇 𝒘𝒊𝒏𝒏𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒊𝒇 𝒊𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒊𝒓 𝒆𝒚𝒆𝒔 𝒚𝒐𝒖'𝒍𝒍 𝒂𝒍𝒘𝒂𝒚𝒔 𝒃𝒆 𝒂 𝒅𝒖𝒎𝒃 𝒃𝒍𝒐𝒏𝒅𝒆."

The Prophecy by adrienette4life42001

Hawkmoth and Mayura has grown stronger and Ladybug and Cat Noir need some serious help to defeat him. While in their sleep someone comes to them in a dream with a prophecy that will change everything. But who the prophecy was talking about was someone they never expected

Zombie Apocalypse by obvious_meme

It's a zombie apocalypse what more description do you need? ((Completed))

Wendizzy's Writer Room by Wendizzy

In this book, you'll get a behind the scenes look at how your favorite characters were born, my creative process, and the dirty details never before revealed. Tex's Camp Q&A: Come sit by the fire and ask me whatever you'd like. We can roast marshmallows, tell scary stories, and hang out in the comments like a big, happy family. Gator's Backstage Pass: A place full of secrets. Learn the-sometimes embarrassing-details on how my wildest scenes came to life, facts about the characters, the process, and myself.

Star-Crossed: The Next Generation (Nashi love story) by SavannabethChase

Nashi Dragneel has anticipated turning sixteen for as long as she can remember. Her strict father- Natsu- said that was the age she had to be to go on her very first job. Of all the things she expected to happen on her birthday, however, finding her mate wasn't one of them. She certainly never thought that her best friend would end up being her soulmate. This is my fanfic, so please, no one steal it. I am not the owner of Fairy Tail, I'm just a fangirl.

❝𝐇𝐄𝐘 𝐀𝐍𝐆𝐄𝐋❞ - 𝐚𝐱𝐞𝐥 𝐤𝐨𝐯𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐜 by LoonysLestrange

" I come alive when I hear your voice. " When the girl who's never found love is thrown into the captain position of a team competing in the biggest karate tournament in the world bumps into the captain of the team everybody wants to beat. While she's haunted by her own demons, she deals with the pressure of her past, he notices her from afar, wondering if she's hurt or dangerous. " It's a beautiful sound, it's a beautiful noise. " Started: November 18, 2024 Finished: February 14, 2024 Wordcount: 60,688 (trigger warnings inside) (axel kovacevic x fem oc) (s6) (I only own my oc's and their storylines) #2 in axelkovacevic : 21.11.2024 #1 in axel : 26.11.2024 #1 in daniellarusso : 02.12.2024

Learning to Love, Too [Miraculous- DJ Wifi] by xlaurynwritesx

We know how Marinette and Adrien fell in love, but what about Alya and Nino? In this sequel to Learning to Love also written by @xLaurynElizabethx we learn the story of Alya and Nino and how they grow together. Will they stay together or will everything fall apart? I recommend that you read Learning to Love because the two stories are connected. It isn't necessary, but it could be fun to see the connections.

My bad little boy (fiolee) by Izzybella342

Marshall lee and Fionna have been friends forever. He's her best bud but what will happen when she starts to develop feelings for the vampire king. and the shocking turn of events when gumball realizes that he's in love with Fionna. What will happen then. Disclaimer I do not own Adventure time the people who Make Adventure time do. If I owned it there would be a lot more than just 2 Fionna and Cake episodes. I do own the story line and all of the characters that I added.

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𝗗𝗲𝘀𝗶𝗿𝗲 𝗔𝗻𝗱 𝗗𝗲𝗹𝗶𝗰𝗮𝗰𝘆 cover

𝐅𝐨𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐢𝐬 𝐎𝐮𝐫𝐬 ♡⸝⸝ cover

𝐁𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐝𝐢𝐞 {𝐅𝐮𝐥𝐥 𝐇𝐨𝐮𝐬𝐞} [𝐎𝐂 𝐗 𝐎𝐂] cover

The Prophecy cover

Zombie Apocalypse cover

Wendizzy's Writer Room cover

Star-Crossed: The Next Generation (Nashi love story) cover

❝𝐇𝐄𝐘 𝐀𝐍𝐆𝐄𝐋❞ - 𝐚𝐱𝐞𝐥 𝐤𝐨𝐯𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐜 cover

Learning to Love, Too [Miraculous- DJ Wifi] cover

My bad little boy (fiolee) cover

𝗗𝗲𝘀𝗶𝗿𝗲 𝗔𝗻𝗱 𝗗𝗲𝗹𝗶𝗰𝗮𝗰𝘆

𝗦𝗵𝗲 𝗜𝘀 𝗧𝗼𝗼 𝗗𝗲𝗹𝗶𝗰𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝗙𝗼𝗿 His 𝗗𝗲𝘀𝗶𝗿𝗲 "Damm, whenever you're in my arms, I feel like I might crush you. You're so delicate," he said, kissing her cheek. "Huh?" "It took me three years to hug you, and today you let him hug you, huh?" he asked, trying to control his anger. "He is your brother," she said, trying to move from his grip. "So what? It doesn't matter. We'v been married for a month, and you didn't allow me to kiss you. But today, you hug him? I'm very upset," he said, looking straight into her eyes. "I'm sorry," she said. "I'm a very loyal and possessive man. Just because I haven't kissed or touched you doesn't mean I can't. Now, what will you do to make it up to me?" "I... I will..." "You will what?" "I will sit on your lap and feed you," she said. "From now on, you'll do this every morning and night."