The Capture
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Last published Tue, Apr 5, 2016
When Florence Delacroix, chief of the IEB disappears one beautiful morning, her colleagues and neighbors are scared. Especially as a dangerous criminal announced the capture of an IEB officer.
Florence, on the other hand, makes a shocking discovery. In the hands of her capturers, she has to stay alive while saving the lives of her colleagues and trying to win back the most important person she had ever lost.
Her friends are fighting for her, but will their help be enough?
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