Eye Of The Deep
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Are you a fan of fantasy? Unreal things, adventure, unrealistic persons? If yes, this story is the perfect one for you. Turn on your imagination and enjoy the ride of the young girl called Amanda. Be part of her weird and wondrous life, yet stressful and hard. Be prepared to smile, laugh, drop a few tears and feel character's emotions.
Amanda went on summer holiday with her family after the death of her best friend Oliver. She's having a great time along her friends, seaside, carnival... She meets a boy and immediately falls in love. It seems like her life is perfect and fun, but there's always a big twist in every story. She gets hurt, and it affects and changes her entire life. She needs to lie, and to go deep into the sea to find her escape and cure. That leads to the fact - Who to trust? Are the closest persons, such as family and friends, always the honest ones? Is Oliver really dead? Will she survive?
Despite that, her mind is all up to finding the only thing that could save her. Will she find it? Or will she leave her old life far behind and never come back? How will the plot develop after she meets a lot of new friends and enemies?
Keep up with development, adventures and let me know what do you like and opposite. I'm open for any thoughts.
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