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Allegiant - alternate ending

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allegiant alternate ending fanfiction four tris

The Allegiant ending was not so bad but it made me empty. There were two reasons why I did not like it. Firstly the sacrifice as it is now seems useless to me. For Caleb it was more another grief than help (not thinking about Four...). And the second is the fact that they still didn't solve anything. There was no use of her divergence, if this did not help the word to become better, to find a solution for all these people from the fringe ... I really don't think that her mother would be happy is the story would ended like this. 
All characters all belong to Veronica Roth, but I changed/added some parts! At the beginning I did only minor changes in existing chapters, but then everything is new. THIS STORY CONTAINS ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! Thank you so much for the reads, votes, and comments!!!
I am sorry for grammatical and other mistakes in the text - I am not a native (English) speaker.All Rights Reserved

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Determined by shellmom

this is what I think would have happened if tris would have lived. I hope you like it. I've read alot of stories but I want to try my own. Any feedback is wanted. ENJOY! I do not own all rights belong to Veronica Roth. warning Allegiant spoilers. fan fiction

What could have happend by LittleCrumb4568

A divergent no war story What if Tobias has a sister? What if Eric was nice behind his mean aperance? What if the war never happend? What if...? That were the questions that spooked through my head, so i decided to answer them through my own fanfiction. I know it's an overused topic but i got inspired by other fanfictions so here i am, writing my own. Thats what life's about writing your story. So here is my version of a divergent no war story. Have fun and be brave! <3 The divergent story belongs to Veronica Roth, the divergent world and most of the characters belong to her! I'm only telling the story and I'm adding a few story lines. I repeat: Most of the characters in this story don't belong to me, they belong to the genius Veronica Roth! Warning!: There is talk about abuse! Read at your own risk!

Before I Met You by TMIdivergent3

I grab his hand and take a deep breath. "Thank you for making me feel happy and alive again. I don't know what I would've done if I hadn't met you." "Before I met you I never knew life could get better," He whispers back, an the laces his fingers with mine. "You make me feel the same exact way." ***************************************************************************************************** Beatrice Prior went to a private school for most of her life. Right before starting her Junior year her father got relocated to Chicago for his job. Her and her brother, Caleb, kept mostly to their selves their whole Junior year. Only interacting with other people if they accidentally bumped into them in the hallways, but that is it. Beatrice and Caleb didn't mind their life being this way. All books, studying, helping other people, helping their parents around the house, coming home before 8:30 each and every night. This was how they always lived, and they didn't plan on changing it. Until a certain school jock got his attention caught by Beatrice. Beatrice heard rumors about him, but being the person she was she helped him. This got her the nickname Tris from the one and only Four. When this happened she knew her life was changing in way she didn't want it to... or so she thought. **DISCLAIMER** I do not own any of the characters, they all belong to the lovely Veronica Roth. ***This is an AU Divergent fanfiction***

A New "Life" [COMPLETED] ✔️ by TheWalkingHeda

Second book is now up on Wattpad! "One Choice." [DISCONTINUED] - Sorry || In the last book of The Divergent Series, Allegiant, Tris doesn't die. She kills David before he can kill her and releases the serum. Soon after, she moves into the city with Tobias and some of the other refugees. They find out that they will be expecting but the plan for a family is cut short when they are kidnapped, brought to The Milwaukee Experiment, and are wiped of their memories. Tris' memory is spared due to her divergence but no one knows. She will have to escape the city with the ones she loves in order to create a lasting future for her and her child. With some bumps in the way... {DISCLAIMER} This is a fanfic and it is based off of the book and movie series The Divergent Series which is written by Veronica Roth. This fanfic starts after the last book of the series Allegiant. I created a few characters but most of the characters in this fan fiction I do not own. All rights go to Veronica Roth for her amazing series. - This is the very first story I've ever written on WattPad so it's very very poorly written and definitely not how I write now. I've decided to keep it up to let all of you readers give it a chance even though I would basically change the whole story if I was to re write it.

Starting Over by BringTheButterKnife

Two years after Allegiant Tris comes back to the factions. Nobody knows who she really is, even Tobias. She's not sure she's ready to tell anyone that she faked her death. Now she has to go through initiation all over again as a different girl who still loves the same guy, but does he still love her? All rights to Veronica Roth

What Happened? by thelastprior

What happens when Tris loses her memory of the past 6 years? She forgot she's married to Tobias, that right now, she is pregnant with a baby girl. What will happen? All characters are owned and created by Veronica Roth I hope you like it =)

A Different Fate (After Allegiant-Divergent) by Bookjunkie001

WARNING IF YOU HAVE NOT READ ALLEGIANT THEN DO NOT READ THIS BOOK OR EVEN THE SUMMARY! I HAVE WARNED YOU! It has been two years since Tris' death, and Tobias still isn't coping with the pain. He stays strong for the people on the outside, while on the inside he is broken and lost without Tris. But, he just has to keep telling himself that life goes on, and that his life will get better, even though some days will be hard to cope through. But that's what friends are for, right? But what happens when he looses friends, or when some want to become more than friends? Will it drive him insane, or will he just accept the fact that Tris is gone and she would want him to go on with life. But Tris never left him. She is with him everyday, he just doesn't know it. So how will she communicate with him? Or will she just stay in the shadows, watching over Tobias, watching him fall in love all over again? What if they found a way to be together again? This story will be told in Tris' and Tobias' POV. This takes place basically right where Allegiant left off **I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE DIVERGENT CHARACTERS. THE BASIS OF THE STORY AND ALL THE CHARACTERS BELONG TO VERONICA ROTH**

Allegiant Alternate Ending by Suniedaze

Like so many others, I was not happy with the way Allegiant ended. I thought Veronica Roth did a beautiful job of writing Tobias's perspective after Tris's death, but I felt like her death was meaningless because it could have been avoided. Having her die because she forgot her gun in the hallway was an insult to her character. Tris was way too smart for that. I needed their happy ending as well as one that did the characters justice. (I don't own any of the characters or the story. All the credit goes to Veronica Roth )

Defiant by TaylorJones125

This is how I think Allegiant should have ended. They deserved a life. And family. They went through too much. So here is my idea of how it should have ended: Tris prior survived the weapons lab and tobias saved her. What will they do now? Will they live in peace now that the factions have been reinstated? What happens when a new group called the defiant start preparing fOr a war? The friends and family they thought dead start showing up alive. How? Who else is alive? What happens when a little bit of family shows up in tobias' life. What happens when a girl shows up tris never thought she would meet? Can they really trust the defiant? What will tris and Tobias do now that they also have a family to look after. Can they ever really be safe? All rights to Veronica Roth. I don't own any of the characters or ideas.

Disremembered (Fourtris story) by FourTris_HEA

What happens when one lover forgets, while the other is desperate for them to remember. True love lasts forever. But what if it doesn't? Tris survives the shooting in Allegiant - only to return and learn that the Tobias she knows and loves - did not. With his memories gone - will Tobias go back to her, or continue to move on with someone else? How much will Tris be willing to take before moving on herself. dis•re•mem•ber (ˌdɪs rɪˈmɛm bər) v.t. to forget. ****************************************************************************** ****************************************************************************** An alternative ending to Veronica Roth's Allegiant. Disclaimer~ I don't own the characters Veronica Roth does DISCLAIMER: This story contains implied adult-intimate-situations, minor foul language, and mild violence.

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Determined

this is what I think would have happened if tris would have lived. I hope you like it. I've read alot of stories but I want to try my own. Any feedback is wanted. ENJOY! I do not own all rights belong to Veronica Roth. warning Allegiant spoilers. fan fiction