Allegiant - alternate ending - oneearth - Wattpad

Allegiant - alternate ending

Reads 1,004
Votes 2
Parts 14
Time 56m

Reads 1,004
Votes 2
Parts 14
Time 56m

allegiant alternate ending fanfiction four tris

The Allegiant ending was not so bad but it made me empty. There were two reasons why I did not like it. Firstly the sacrifice as it is now seems useless to me. For Caleb it was more another grief than help (not thinking about Four...). And the second is the fact that they still didn't solve anything. There was no use of her divergence, if this did not help the word to become better, to find a solution for all these people from the fringe ... I really don't think that her mother would be happy is the story would ended like this. 
All characters all belong to Veronica Roth, but I changed/added some parts! At the beginning I did only minor changes in existing chapters, but then everything is new. THIS STORY CONTAINS ALLEGIANT SPOILERS! Thank you so much for the reads, votes, and comments!!!
I am sorry for grammatical and other mistakes in the text - I am not a native (English) speaker.All Rights Reserved

allegiant alternate ending fanfiction four tris

Table of contents

14 parts

Sign up to add Allegiant - alternate ending to your library and receive updates

or

Content Guidelines

You may also like

Allegiant - The Real Ending by skyes_curse

{COMPLETE} First of all: The Divergent Series doesn't belong to me but the amazing Veronica Roth. Second of all: Tris never dies, Four never dates Christina, Caleb will always be a Erudite. Third of all: Disclaimer: I respect Ms. Roth's ending, but I still love Tris, so here I am. I also don't own Divergent. EXCERPT FROM TOBIAS' POV: 'That is how I lost my temper. I couldn't stand her. Or David. Or The precious, ever-so-worthy Bureau. I punched her square in the nose, and she fell. Weakling. Do these so-called Pures know how to fight? I kick her, until someone pulls me away. I hear them mutter, "stupid Dauntless soldiers. Why is this my job, taking them to David?"' EXCERPT FROM TRIS' POV: 'Mom?" I say, softly, and she embraces me. But this time it is not a tug towards death, but rather the opposite. A string to life. "Beatrice," she says, and I break from the hug. "I just wanted to say to you that I am so proud of you, Beatrice. You are strong, brave, intelligent, and beautiful. I can tell you are going to have a great future with Tobias." Then she says to me what she said to me a month ago, an hour before I had met Tobias/Four, and exactly 50 minutes before I had met Christina. "I love you. No matter what." My arms wrap around her again, and we embrace until she fades, and I get back into reality. But before I fall out of the dream I say "I love you, too, Mom. I always will."'

Disremembered (Fourtris story) by FourTris_HEA

What happens when one lover forgets, while the other is desperate for them to remember. True love lasts forever. But what if it doesn't? Tris survives the shooting in Allegiant - only to return and learn that the Tobias she knows and loves - did not. With his memories gone - will Tobias go back to her, or continue to move on with someone else? How much will Tris be willing to take before moving on herself. dis•re•mem•ber (ˌdɪs rɪˈmɛm bər) v.t. to forget. ****************************************************************************** ****************************************************************************** An alternative ending to Veronica Roth's Allegiant. Disclaimer~ I don't own the characters Veronica Roth does DISCLAIMER: This story contains implied adult-intimate-situations, minor foul language, and mild violence.

Defiant by TaylorJones125

This is how I think Allegiant should have ended. They deserved a life. And family. They went through too much. So here is my idea of how it should have ended: Tris prior survived the weapons lab and tobias saved her. What will they do now? Will they live in peace now that the factions have been reinstated? What happens when a new group called the defiant start preparing fOr a war? The friends and family they thought dead start showing up alive. How? Who else is alive? What happens when a little bit of family shows up in tobias' life. What happens when a girl shows up tris never thought she would meet? Can they really trust the defiant? What will tris and Tobias do now that they also have a family to look after. Can they ever really be safe? All rights to Veronica Roth. I don't own any of the characters or ideas.

Allegiant Alternate Ending by Suniedaze

Like so many others, I was not happy with the way Allegiant ended. I thought Veronica Roth did a beautiful job of writing Tobias's perspective after Tris's death, but I felt like her death was meaningless because it could have been avoided. Having her die because she forgot her gun in the hallway was an insult to her character. Tris was way too smart for that. I needed their happy ending as well as one that did the characters justice. (I don't own any of the characters or the story. All the credit goes to Veronica Roth )

Starting Over by BringTheButterKnife

Two years after Allegiant Tris comes back to the factions. Nobody knows who she really is, even Tobias. She's not sure she's ready to tell anyone that she faked her death. Now she has to go through initiation all over again as a different girl who still loves the same guy, but does he still love her? All rights to Veronica Roth

What Happened? by thelastprior

What happens when Tris loses her memory of the past 6 years? She forgot she's married to Tobias, that right now, she is pregnant with a baby girl. What will happen? All characters are owned and created by Veronica Roth I hope you like it =)

Transcendent by Sharon_Carter

We all know what happens at the end of Allegiant,right. Well what would have happened if Tris didn't die but was saved by a secret government organisation. Under a new name and a new appearance, Tris must travel back to Chicago if she is to stop a reckless serial killer. But when she finds out Tobias has moved on, and with someone she would have never expected, everything comes crashing down. But will she stay in order to protect the ones she loves and herself? This is an alternative ending to Allegiant. I own none of the original characters as the amazing Veronica Roth does. But some are a figment of my imagination. Please comment, like and follow! *Just to be clear, I've had a lot of comments confused about this but Will, Uriah, Lynn and Marlene are all still alive as well.

mended vs. settLed (a FOURTRIS love story) by FourTris_HEA

Summary: Tobias is devastated when Tris, the love of his life, dies the day the memory serum is released at the bureau. In his grief, he attempts to take the memory serum in order to wipe away his pain, Tris's best friend stops him. Christina helps him to see that Tris would have hated him erasing her from his mind, she told him "The person you became with her is worth being." A year passes as Tobias develops a close friendship with Christina, she then pushes him to move on from his grief, to live his life and just move forward. They begin a romantic relationship. This story will begin as one couple is just beginning and then a true love is discovered to still be alive. The difficulties all face as they move forward. There is mending and then there is settling. +++++o++++++o+++++ This is a fourtris love story, of angst, healing and romance. A lot of angst. This will not be a Fourstina, Tostina, etc, story (aka settling). If you have strong feelings about Fourstina - this is not going to be the story for you. Disclaimer: An alternative ending to Veronica Roth's Allegiant. Third book in The Divergent Series. An alternate point of view/interpretation of epilogue, We Can Be Mended by Veronica Roth. Rights/Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters, Veronica Roth does DISCLAIMER: This story contains adult-intimate-situations, strong language, and mild physical and emotional violence.

Before I Met You by TMIdivergent3

I grab his hand and take a deep breath. "Thank you for making me feel happy and alive again. I don't know what I would've done if I hadn't met you." "Before I met you I never knew life could get better," He whispers back, an the laces his fingers with mine. "You make me feel the same exact way." ***************************************************************************************************** Beatrice Prior went to a private school for most of her life. Right before starting her Junior year her father got relocated to Chicago for his job. Her and her brother, Caleb, kept mostly to their selves their whole Junior year. Only interacting with other people if they accidentally bumped into them in the hallways, but that is it. Beatrice and Caleb didn't mind their life being this way. All books, studying, helping other people, helping their parents around the house, coming home before 8:30 each and every night. This was how they always lived, and they didn't plan on changing it. Until a certain school jock got his attention caught by Beatrice. Beatrice heard rumors about him, but being the person she was she helped him. This got her the nickname Tris from the one and only Four. When this happened she knew her life was changing in way she didn't want it to... or so she thought. **DISCLAIMER** I do not own any of the characters, they all belong to the lovely Veronica Roth. ***This is an AU Divergent fanfiction***

The New Initiates by KristenTruman

Okay guys, this is my first go at a divergent Fanfic. I don't own divergent, or most of the characters. if you are interested in being in this story, message me. this Fanfic is set as if certain events from divergent/ insurgent/ allegiant never happened (although I love all of those books) Please comment with constructive criticism, don't be too harsh. Pretty much everything belongs to Veronica Roth. enjoy.

You may also like

Slide 1 of 10

Allegiant - The Real Ending cover

Disremembered (Fourtris story) cover

Allegiant Alternate Ending cover

Starting Over cover

What Happened? cover

Transcendent cover

mended vs. settLed (a FOURTRIS love story) cover

Before I Met You cover

The New Initiates cover

Allegiant - The Real Ending

{COMPLETE} First of all: The Divergent Series doesn't belong to me but the amazing Veronica Roth. Second of all: Tris never dies, Four never dates Christina, Caleb will always be a Erudite. Third of all: Disclaimer: I respect Ms. Roth's ending, but I still love Tris, so here I am. I also don't own Divergent. EXCERPT FROM TOBIAS' POV: 'That is how I lost my temper. I couldn't stand her. Or David. Or The precious, ever-so-worthy Bureau. I punched her square in the nose, and she fell. Weakling. Do these so-called Pures know how to fight? I kick her, until someone pulls me away. I hear them mutter, "stupid Dauntless soldiers. Why is this my job, taking them to David?"' EXCERPT FROM TRIS' POV: 'Mom?" I say, softly, and she embraces me. But this time it is not a tug towards death, but rather the opposite. A string to life. "Beatrice," she says, and I break from the hug. "I just wanted to say to you that I am so proud of you, Beatrice. You are strong, brave, intelligent, and beautiful. I can tell you are going to have a great future with Tobias." Then she says to me what she said to me a month ago, an hour before I had met Tobias/Four, and exactly 50 minutes before I had met Christina. "I love you. No matter what." My arms wrap around her again, and we embrace until she fades, and I get back into reality. But before I fall out of the dream I say "I love you, too, Mom. I always will."'