The Devil
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  • Parts 7
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Ongoing, First published Jan 28, 2016
Quinn's sister Max died six months ago. They have closed the case but Quinn has never forgotten the anger that burns inside of her deep down. Now she finds a loose board in Max's room. She finds a knife covered in blood. Looks like the one lodged in Max's chest the night she died. 

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BTW don't say it's bad please because this is my first story I have ever written and plus I'm only 13 so yea
Just please don't hate me if u don't like this story
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