Our Relationship (NorIce)

Okay. So here it is. My very first fan fiction story I wrote in English.
I tried to write a happy NorIce but turned out to be something weird.
Before you read, please let me apologize for the really bad English. Wrong grammars and lacks for variety of words and expressions. Really. I think an 8 year old would write way better than me.
I'm sorry if I disgust you in anyways. By the way , nothing belongs to me except for this story I made.
Below, I'll right right down my image of NorIce and Sufin. If you're not interested, please ignore.
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I think SuFin is really like a couple whose been married for a long time.
Has kids (sealand and Ladonia) and is more of a family than a romance.
I think NorIce instead, is a young couple that has just engaged. Rather not have kids now because they're too busy with themselves.

I don't know if this sentence is understandable. I'll try to do better next time.