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The Mistake
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Ongoing, First published Feb 03, 2016
•Seven Friends•

•One Mystery•
* * *


Senior year has finally arrived and each friend has a goal to be matched.

Brian: To make a college hockey team.

Mary: Finally get her one book she's been working on since sixth grade to be published.

Jalynn: Start her singing career.

Killian: Straighten his life out and get into a college for art.

Heather: Start her fashion line in California and soon make it to Paris.

Devon: Make senior prom king.

Jared: Get a scholarship into Stanford University and finally make his parents proud of him for something.


But one mistake has been made.

When one of the beloved friends are killed in a car crash, all plans are shattered. Everyone views it as one mistake.

But is it really...?

Suspicions are rising and Ridgewood High's tension is growing stronger.

Was it really all just a mistake?
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