Choices

This story is set in the future, where Earth is almost blown into bits, but is stopped in the process. The result is a globe shaped heap of rocks, little islands floating barely hanging on gravity and the magnetic field of the core. The islands consist (depending on size) of a country or two, a city or two, and the one we will look at, is a small island of the original surface, with a country (a little nomadic) of the name Aditi, and a city (very modern, and ripped from its motherland) running under the name Tikrong. The people of Aditi breed horses and live in small pinehouses on a huge meadow surrounded by hills. Tikrong is a blossoming city with the Crystal Palace standing in the middle, as the parliament. The two nations are standing against and fearing each other, and while they're fighting their own battles, bigger changes are occurring on this torn planet.
Many deaths and brutal life stories, romantic (straight and gay) relationships, murder, hunting, some funny scenes, supernatural creatures (as in angels, panther-human mixes, dream eaters, shapeshifters, necromancers).
This is my first time writing more than 15 pages, and it's a struggle, so excuse is and read it with forgiveness for all the mistakes.
Thank you very much!
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