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Four Hopes (Part 1,Find Him)

Four Hopes (Part 1,Find Him)

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My word. It has been so long since the time I've really been myself. I feel Evil. Like some evil criminal forced me into doing the wrong. Like they want me to feel ashamed. Of course, that's all in the pass. What I should be focusing on is what's going on in front of me. On the other side of the street in, I see a young boy. Fourteen none the less. I have never meet the boy, but all I could do was follow him. I had nothing else to do so it wasn't effecting my life as it is. All i know is that his name was Cloud. Though I knew everyone's name so it didn't matter as much, it was just an interesting name. So about a minute passed and Cloud spot with his blue eyes a girl. Her name was Corrin. Long, Black hair fit on top her head perfectly. And she wore a Red sweater with her hands always in her pockets. Being beautiful and the same age as Cloud, I could tell the young man was desperate to let a Hi fly into her ear and she would notice. The only concerning thing was she was wounded. She looked like she just came out of such an intense fight, with the long, red cut going down her cheek being extremely noticeable. Cloud did not hesitate. "Excuse me but are you okay." She replied. "Yeah I'm okay. I've just been cut that's all. Nothing bad". She seem to think of the cut as just a pimple on her face. The only pimple on that face. Cloud let out slowly,"Do you mind if I..." he paused. Forgot what he would say next completely. But it came out."take a look at the cut". God Damn, he's face turned more Red than the Freshest tomato. Corrin didn't acknowledge that. Instead, she smiled and said yes. She then let this out."You seem like an okay guy. What's your name". Immediately, Cloud blurred his name."ITS CLOUD. CLOUD LUDWIG". I didn't know what was funny, but she sure found it humorous. She than introduced herself. "I'm Corrin White. They now seemed to be friends. Going on, Corrin is a girl I've already met unlike Cloud. So instead, I tailed Corrin home. She has something I need.
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{Completed - #12 highest} I was walking on a path all alone at midnight. I was just wondering around, until I saw a guy in a hoodie. He was beating the pulp out of another guy and one more man was on the ground, he was not moving. I gasped. 'Is he dead?' Or he can be unconscious, yeah 'el' he is just unconscious not dead. Duh! Who would kill a guy? As I was proceeding with my thoughts, that hoodie guy turned his face towards me. My heart had a mini heart attack. I turned my heels to the opposite direction and started to run. 'Run Ella, run for your life' was what my mind was screaming to me. I took turns without thinking, that guy was now following me and guess what? I took a wrong turn and which ended up being a dead end ' You are so dead' I thought. So, I started to think what I said last time to the people I love. 'Good night mom, love you.' to my mom, 'Stop annoying me! I'm going to bed.' to dad which also mean I love you, 'See you later Lu, love you!' to Luana. Okay my good bye says I love them all. Now I can die in peace. Granddad I'll meet you soon in the heaven, if you are there. I was still in my deep thoughts until I saw his silhouette. As, he get closer, my heart begin to race faster. I closed my eyes, until I heard him say "Ella?" O to the M to the G, this person actually knows me. I opened my one eye and saw him due to the small light hanging in that ally "Errrrr'ick!" I squeaked and mentally face palmed myself. Even at this state I'm calling him Errr'ick. "I'm sorry your highness, what can I do for you?" I squeaked again while trembling. The next second I heard his fits of laughter. He was rolling on the floor, actually rofling. I was glaring at him but I realised that I'm not in a position to glare. So, I made puppy dog face for him to spare my little life. He stopped but after seeing my face, he started to laugh again. He tried to say between his guffaws "You..... your face .....was epiccc!" He started to gasp for air and had tears in his eyes.

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